Channel Review

Dave Schaffner

Active Member
Hello everyone if anyone can take a few minutes of their time to look at my channel and just give me some general opinions about my channel and content let me know what could be different or if something looks good or doesn't look good. looking for helpful criticism
 
Alright so I watched two of your videos, "I'm putting myself first" and "Wednesdy walking with the Zombie"

Now from the second video your intro is way to long I mean a 38 second intro is a bit much for the average viewer, in the first video your using a webcam im guessing because of the lag and the mic quality, if your going to be more consisted with your uploading getting better gear would help out alot. Your voice is all good I can understand you and hear you clearly which is a good thing. One thing I would suggest doing in the future is editing your videos so you cut out parts where your mind goes blank or if you ramble on quite a bit, it makes the video shorter and people enjoy it. There's not a whole lot of humour in your videos all of your videos seem to be dark or your not particularlly happy looking, this can drive people away because people like watching and seeing bright positive people where as you seem to be giving off the opposite vibe, maybe thats what your going for I dont know but its just something I noticed.

Overall I would give your channel a 5/50

theres things than can be improved a little bit and improved a great deal but so far as a vlogger yourself you seem pretty good I mean i'd watch you
 
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