Channel review request

Scootakip [Lana]

I Love YTtalk
Lately my videos have been performing terribly. It's quite annoying, considering how much effort I put into them.
Could anyone take a look at my channel and see what I could improve upon?
 
I've had a look around and watched a couple of your videos. Here's what I think:

The content isn't bad, but there are probably a few things you could do to make the videos a little more engaging. I'll use the Tiny toons video for my example as its the one I watched most recently. Here's a few things that I think might help:
-Streamline. You can cut down on some parts of the explanations on most of the video, this way you'll reach the point quicker and get to deliver the punchlines of jokes quicker too.
-Enthusiasm. I can hear that you're trying to sound enthusiastic on parts, but sometimes it just sounds forced. Taking JonTron as an example, the reason his reactions work so well is that they are very real and human reactions to things, just very over the top. It seems like you're trying to do the over the top bit without considering the human bit. Sit and think about how you actually react to things, then crank that reaction up to 11 and show us that!

Honestly your content is well on the way to being great, but with the types of videos you're making it's going to be tough to keep a good upload schedule. And unfortunately that is very important if you want to grow. Really all you can do is keep growing and improving your videos and then share them everywhere you can! Best of luck!
 
Hi man I just had a look at your channel and found that the content your making is very good and no bad at all the problem I am seeing is that your doing reviews on games which no one plays anymore. I would do games which have come out in the last 6 years ( I.e GTA 5 ). Your doing great though.
Hope this helped.
 
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Lately my videos have been performing terribly. It's quite annoying, considering how much effort I put into them.
Could anyone take a look at my channel and see what I could improve upon?

I think your content is solid. I found myself sucked in even though I didn't care about the games too much. I do feel like they could maybe be trimmed a touch, but then you risk losing some personality. I love the drawings, but I'm kind of torn because I'd also like to see more gameplay and the intro seems like a good place to put it...

I think for your content the age of the games kind of works better because the games your covering are amusing/interesting in a timeless sense. Downside is that there won't be a lot of search traffic...so you're going to be playing the long game to build up awareness and views. Maybe sprinkling in a couple videos with more trending/searchable content to build exposure would help you drive views to your 'core' content?
 
Scootakip re your channel trailer moosic.. you made shameful progress in butchering one of the worlds/universe bestest ever grunge rock/metal tracks of ALL time. Kurt will drop kick your a** if the big one actually lets you through the pearly gates for this abomination.
I like your video intro! You best video for vies was 9 games for 2 dollas. Maybe make more like that and capitalise on the most successful videos etc. You already know what works for you. Hope helps.
 
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