Can you guy review this comedy sketch for me?

[Tyron Fedrick]

One of my close friends told me it was hard for him to keep interest in the video because he felt it was too long. Can you guys give me your thoughts on it?

 

[SkyDawggy]

Hey, we would be happy to help you guys out. Check out our channel https://www.youtube.com/user/TheRytonStudios and let us know what you think! Nice job on your video, keep at it!

 

[Skeltano]

I think it's a decent video, several parts made me laugh, but the audio eventually goes out of sync.

 

[Tyron Fedrick]

I think it's a decent video, several parts made me laugh, but the audio eventually goes out of sync.

Thanks for the response. Truly mean that. I didn't notice the audio problem but I'll make sure that doesn't happen again for any of my future videos. Thanks again for the response!

 

[Skeltano]

Thanks for the response. Truly mean that. I didn't notice the audio problem but I'll make sure that doesn't happen again for any of my future videos. Thanks again for the response!

No problem, just keep working!

 

[Tyron Fedrick]

No problem, just keep working!

Will do lol

 

[Kcomics]

Hey, while there are some funny bits in there, there are a couple fundamental things you can improve upon.

First, the audio, the audio sound way too empty and unprofessional. Just invest in some medium quality mics.

Second, the pacing is a bit slow. You can edit it with a faster pace and make it easier for viewers to sit through.

Hope it helps. Best of luck