Next time you might want to just post the video into the post (it'll help us figure out which one in particular.) I generally ask for an example, and then I go off that.
However, gladly give a review to a video. Looking for one now...
Voice pretty good. Music is extremely amusing. The framerate is not happy often, Minecraft does that to me often (murders my framerate). Where are you getting the music from? I'm loving it.
Alright. I ... took a gander at two videos. They're not bad at all, your presentation is fairly solid. I think you might do better if you have some sort of intro and brand your videos (I'm not sure if you are branding the Ablockaplyse or not). Not bad so far, I can only see you getting even better as you start to prepare and storyboard presentations and upgrade how you get footage.