Breaking down Trump vs. Clinton

First of all I commend you for doing something that takes work and is actually funny. Great job.

Where I would work it improve is the audio mixing and narrative delivery. The music is too loud, mostly because the narration is too quiet. This isn't strictly a mixing issue because I can tell when you recorded the dialogue you did so very quietly. I recommend upping the enthusiasm, or if you're going for deadpan then speak the same way but a little louder and mix it a little higher.

Keep up the great work!
 
Thanks for the feedback! I'm still finding myself with regards to the narrating :D I feel like the deadpan-style comes more naturally to me but it might just come out boring. I'm trying to up the enthusiasm a bit for my next video to see how it works but it's just really hard for me as I'm not the most energetic of people :laugh2: I guess it's a matter of practice in the end.
 
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