A very sad attempt at a Commentary

TheHealthyCow

Got Milk?
I just uploaded a commentary with no particular topic, just so I can improve upon my commentating! Please give constructive criticism, it would be appreciated and is the main purpose of this video! Also too give a little information about me!


Oh yeah, there is a awkward 10 second pause in the middle of the video. :)
 
I can't watch the video atm, but I'm marking it with this comment.
One thing I would say is change your title on this thread. People are immediately turned off if you don't have confidence in your product :)
 
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