A Gaming Visual Novel to Review Please!

[AntsDeKing]

Hey and thank you for taking the time for reading this! I’m currently making a let’s play on a mobile/steam visual novel called Moe! Ninja Girls.

Below will be the link towards my most recent episode and I would like feedback towards my thumbnail, quality within the audio, commentary and anything else you really would like to note.

But please enjoy while doing so and thank you once again

 

[DieMan]

Hi Ants

So I have watched some of your vids, and I have some comments:

First of all, I think you have nice editing. You do a lot of greatly timed zooms and voice effects, which I like!

I also like your voice, and I like that you do voice acting. Makes it a bit more alive

I also think the audo quality is good in general.

Here are some things I would consider:

1. I think you could work on and exeagerate your voice acting even more. I think you should try and experiment with over doing your voice acting. That can lead to some new learnings within that skill.
2. Also, I think you should look into editing your voice a bit. It becomes a bit high pitched sometimes. I can recommend using Audacity, It is a free software, and there are many great guides on how to use it online.
3. Finally, and most importantly, I think you should consider what kind of audience you are targeting. Personally, I do not find these kinds of games that exiting (I like your Bully lets play series way more ) But that i sof course preference. However, I think this series is a bit niche, So maybe you should share your videos on Anime/Manga forums? Could be that you can find people who are really into this there.

Thank you for the watch!

/Die Man