1st Sketch - Slap Shi* Out Friend, Saran Wrap Head, etc.

AreYouAwareBro

AreYouAwareBro

I check out your videos if you comment on mine!
And that's just the beginning of it! This sketch took 16 hours of filming and 4 or 5 hours to edit down, it's a bit lengthy but I guarantee it's worth your time. The premise is there is a controller that can turn people braindead, so me and my friends use it on each other and pull mass pranks (slap the fu** out of my friend, saran wrap the other, full glass of milk on the head, lipstick/eyeliner tied to a pole, more).

I'd appreciate a view and especially if you gave me some feedback and constructive criticism for next time!

 
Haha that was nice. I would suggest trying to have a faster edit.

1 example when the door rings cut the "he's here he's here" Just go directly to where the door opens.

But it was funny! It was a great idea you had there. =]
 
skenkee said:
Haha that was nice. I would suggest trying to have a faster edit.

1 example when the door rings cut the "he's here he's here" Just go directly to where the door opens.

But it was funny! It was a great idea you had there. =]
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Thanks for the CC, brother. I'll keep that in mind as well as scripting it so it's quicker and snappier. 'Twas my first ever sketch so theres only one way that they can go from here and that's better :)
 
AreYouAwareBro said:
Thanks for the CC, brother. I'll keep that in mind as well as scripting it so it's quicker and snappier. 'Twas my first ever sketch so theres only one way that they can go from here and that's better :)
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If that was your first sketch that was a really good job! Even more for unscripted! I see great things in your future. =]
also try to make a few over shoulder shots instead of a medium/ close up. That is also something that makes a video like this more interesting.
 
skenkee said:
If that was your first sketch that was a really good job! Even more for unscripted! I see great things in your future. =]
also try to make a few over shoulder shots instead of a medium/ close up. That is also something that makes a video like this more interesting.
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Thanks again man :) I wasn't sure how I would record it and all that since I was an actor and director and the other actors were sort of relying on me for everything (motivation, lines, etc.). Definitely agree with you about the angle changes, will incorporate that into my next video. I might try to do a sketch next time without myself so I can concentrate harder or camera work and directing so I'm not distracted by being a member of the skit as well.

Appreciate you taking the time to look through AND leave me criticism :)
 
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