gaming review

I would really appreciate it if someone can give me some feedback on my channel/videos and let me know on how I can improve. Any feedback and suggestions would be greatly appreciated :)

Over the weekend I've been to Hell in id Software's newest shooter: Doom 4 (or is it just Doom? Doom 2016???) Now that I've completed the campaign, uncovered every secret, earned every achievement, and bashed the brains out of every demonic threat in the game it's time I recount my experience...