gaming commentaries

Looking for a pc player to collab with on games like apex csgo some flash games and or even roblox my channel is with me and 3 other people some come prepared must have a good sense of humor or good with jokes idc if u cuss my channel is at 225 subs in counting so if we're going to collab make...

First good commentary I've don on my channel. What do you think about it? I'd like some advice if I need to change or improve. Thanks.