feedback request

I just uploaded a channel intro video and I was hoping to get some general feedback on how the video strikes people. Off the bat, I can tell it's probably not everyone's style of humor, but what can you do. Any feedback would be appreciated.

One of our main issues has been our audio being a little to low, and I think that we inally have a handle on that. Im also working on a title card/intro to our videos as well as a outro. But other then that how is it? It is a little on the short side but this is by design to keep retention up...

What's up guys, I just wanted to ask for some feedback on my channel so I can get an idea as to what I need to fix to improve my videos for the future; that's why I signed up for this forum. The Link to my channel is https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCWZdz87GBn93sE-eKJEuMMQ

Hi, I've started my YouTube a few months ago. I've been uploading vlogs and I'd just like a few opinions on them and some feedback on what I'm doing well and what I can improve on.

Hey guys, So I recently sat down for a more elaborate project: my top five brotherhood feel moments in Assassin's Creed. It was my first time doing a video such as this and I have looked at how several larger channels do it before having a go for myself. The idea is to have more of this...