Would anyone tell me what they think of my video?

[stuvproductions]

I have recontly started learning more in cinema 4D and have come up with this video, it would be greatly appreciated if anyone could let me know what they think and how i could impove?

Thank you!

 

[Gawkan]

Got admit, when the cash machine came out the wall and started running away, it made me laugh a bit and I hardly laugh at videos that much so nice video It amazing how people can make videos like that.

 

[shadowenigmatv]

lol the videos hilarious haha as the guy said above its so funny make more

 

[icpchad]

Impressive work. Great job.