Ok, the problems are 1) you need to hold your camera at eye level and LOOK at the audience. Talk to us! 2) The video needs to be about 3 minutes long, not 7. Remember, absent something that holds my attention, I'm looking away from your video after the first two minutes. 3) Lose the do-rag on your head. Present your best look as often as possible, not just any look - that's just me - ask a lady what she thinks.
No problem! Keep vlogging!Thanks for the feedback I appreciate that.