What a messy room really looks like!

WhereMyLaLasAt

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This is a personal video of the mess I can make in my room!

It's disgusting! but please have a looksy!

MY first proper video using my camera so any critics would be welcome in this door!

 
I like your camera. Definitely amazing. Are you using some sort of stabilizer? It's really nice! As for the content of your video, you're talking about too many things at once. It's hard to keep track. I like your idea of doing a before and after... but a little more thought as to portray this endeavour would have given this video a more pleasurable view. Also, the part where you play the guitar... maybe if you did a short goofy song about "messy rooms" would have been more fitting.

Your room was definitely messy. But a better view to fully utilize your camera would have been more effective. You could perhaps kept your camera running while you were cleaning up your room and then edit it after to fast forward so that we can actually see the changes happening would have been a neat idea. However, your method of simply showing a before and after works too... but your after shot wasn't that clean! LOL.

It was hard to determine what kind of style you were going for in this video. Serious? Funny? Bit of both? I don't know... anyway, what I can immediately notice, however, is that not much effort was put into the video. I understand you were testing out your BOSS camera, but perhaps, on your next video, put some effort into editing and planning out your video a little better. With this video, I was tempted to fast track the video no multiple occasions.

Show us what your camera is truly made of! And good stuff on finally attempting to clean your room. It's always a daunting task... especially when a room looked like yours. ;)
 
I like your camera. Definitely amazing. Are you using some sort of stabilizer? It's really nice! As for the content of your video, you're talking about too many things at once. It's hard to keep track. I like your idea of doing a before and after... but a little more thought as to portray this endeavour would have given this video a more pleasurable view. Also, the part where you play the guitar... maybe if you did a short goofy song about "messy rooms" would have been more fitting.

Your room was definitely messy. But a better view to fully utilize your camera would have been more effective. You could perhaps kept your camera running while you were cleaning up your room and then edit it after to fast forward so that we can actually see the changes happening would have been a neat idea. However, your method of simply showing a before and after works too... but your after shot wasn't that clean! LOL.

It was hard to determine what kind of style you were going for in this video. Serious? Funny? Bit of both? I don't know... anyway, what I can immediately notice, however, is that not much effort was put into the video. I understand you were testing out your BOSS camera, but perhaps, on your next video, put some effort into editing and planning out your video a little better. With this video, I was tempted to fast track the video no multiple occasions.

Show us what your camera is truly made of! And good stuff on finally attempting to clean your room. It's always a daunting task... especially when a room looked like yours. ;)


Thank you for the criticsm, it ahs been duly noted! You're perfectly in the right saying there was little thought in this because... there wasn't. I didn't really know what I was trying to accomplish with it either and the quality definitely lacked.
I chose to sing the one direction piece as a homage to one of my earlier videos, and since a lot of my fans subscribed because of that video I tend to try and pander to it a bit much.

I would have done the fast forward room clean thing but I haven't got a tripod yet (how ridiculous, i know!) so I don't really have any good to prop it at the moment.

Just to clarify, It didn't have a style and the video has obviously lacked from that, and is probably a bit long for what was being done. I would like to personally send you my next video (when complete) which I can assure you has had days of planning and will test the camera, my persona and my editing! and will hopefully be a much higher quality video!

Again thank you for your help!
 
Thank you for the criticsm, it ahs been duly noted! You're perfectly in the right saying there was little thought in this because... there wasn't. I didn't really know what I was trying to accomplish with it either and the quality definitely lacked.
I chose to sing the one direction piece as a homage to one of my earlier videos, and since a lot of my fans subscribed because of that video I tend to try and pander to it a bit much.

I would have done the fast forward room clean thing but I haven't got a tripod yet (how ridiculous, i know!) so I don't really have any good to prop it at the moment.

Just to clarify, It didn't have a style and the video has obviously lacked from that, and is probably a bit long for what was being done. I would like to personally send you my next video (when complete) which I can assure you has had days of planning and will test the camera, my persona and my editing! and will hopefully be a much higher quality video!

Again thank you for your help!
I look forward to your next video! I'm amazed you don't have a tripod! (Then again, I don't have one either... lol). Make sure to message me on your next video and I'll be more than happy to review it if you so desire it.
 
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