Video and Channel thoughts

[CaptainFalcon89]

I am looking into improving my channel from when it was first out and also moved into commentary. Any constructive comments would be appreciated.

Also below is my first efforts of commentary and I would like to know ways on how to improve my quality of my commentating.

Constructive comments are also appreciated here.

 

[Disneyboy89]

Its nice.

 

[Alex Eriksson]

I liked the commentary, the sound could have been a little higher. You should try to render the background on your channel so it fitts. Its an cool looking background its sad that the whole thing doesn´t show :/

 

[CaptainFalcon89]

Thanks for the feedback. I would like a bit of assistance on how to make the background work!

 

[Alex Eriksson]

You should try to ask for help on the forums or try to find a "how to" video on youtube .

 

[CaptainFalcon89]

Will do, thanks for the advice!

 

[Alex Eriksson]

Your welcome