Thoughts on series intro?

[Styxie]

Hey, so I made a quick little intro for my series and I'd like some opinions! So far I still need to find a decent bit of music/sound fx for the sound and maybe trim a second off at the end, but other than that please do say what you think
Just a note, I like simple things, so I made it pretty simple.

Cheers <3

 

[KGATV]

Looks good

 

[Styxie]

Looks good

Cheers! Anything you'd change?

 

[KGATV]

Cheers! Anything you'd change?

Nope

 

[orrm]

Was the static noise intentional?

 

[PineappleRocket]

Ya, sound would finish it off. Looks nice and simple.

 

[Grohlvana]

I think it would be cooler if you flew through the building, like if you went inside of it.