The Good, The Bad, And The Ugly.

thejohnnyk

thejohnnyk

I've Got It
I want to hear all of it. Brand new Intro. What's Good, What's Bad, What's Ugly?
Also should I add in the glasses logo below the words?
Also should I add the Red White and Blue Stripe to my thumbnail?

Watch the intro here.
 
Lol, did you happen to read my thread earlier about people being too nice? I'm about to watch right now, be prepared!
 
I don't play Minecraft, so I can't directly relate to this..... What's good is your sound quality of your commentary... Now to the fun part.... When I looked and saw that your trailer was 19 minutes long, that is a HUGE intro, so I went forward in the video... I don't see much progression or anything telling what to expect in your channel. I have a pretty lame intro, but it's a bunch of short highlights from some of the better moments I've recorded. You need to make something that demonstrates the best parts of your channel, not just another REALLY long video. Basically, you need to capture the audience's attention within the first 5 seconds and keep it for a whole minute.
 
I like how your intro is but the only thing that's slightly bugging me is the length of it. May just be me but i thought it was a few seconds too long? On the other hand i really like your logo and i think the font and title fits very well.
I can't really comment on the stripes as i haven't seen it properly as a thumbnail, you should experiment a bit :)
But still. From one Johnny to another,
Good job sir!
 
Munchito696 said:
I don't play Minecraft, so I can't directly relate to this..... What's good is your sound quality of your commentary... Now to the fun part.... When I looked and saw that your trailer was 19 minutes long, that is a HUGE intro, so I went forward in the video... I don't see much progression or anything telling what to expect in your channel. I have a pretty lame intro, but it's a bunch of short highlights from some of the better moments I've recorded. You need to make something that demonstrates the best parts of your channel, not just another REALLY long video. Basically, you need to capture the audience's attention within the first 5 seconds and keep it for a whole minute.
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yeah, I dont actually have a trailer yet. It's my next project. I was just curious about the ten second intro I embedded.
 
Johnny Graviti said:
I like how your intro is but the only thing that's slightly bugging me is the length of it. May just be me but i thought it was a few seconds too long? On the other hand i really like your logo and i think the font and title fits very well.
I can't really comment on the stripes as i haven't seen it properly as a thumbnail, you should experiment a bit :)
But still. From one Johnny to another,
Good job sir!
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Thank you Johnny, I'll take a look at the length here shortly.

wakeuptoryan said:
For what you're doing, quite honestly I really liked the intro. Short and too the point :)
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I appreciate the comment. Thanks!
 
Looks good but you might want to consider is a different style tranition for the text, the fading in of the random letters seems slightly distracting in a short intro, either that or lengthen the intro overall.
 
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