Symphonious7 I CHALLENGE YOU!!!!!!!!

Not bad haha, I laughed at the come and get the mouse bit the most, I was expecting you to go crazy in the end and throw something in a tantrum lol good challenge!
 
MegaCodeG said:
Ok so this is my first comedy video!

i dont know if its any good...cuz its my first time and i dont know if its funny...

Half inspired by Simph so I CHALLENGE YOU!


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YOU DID GOOD!!! And you were inspired by me??? I'm sooo flattered!! I'm not sure how I'm supposed to respond to this "challenge"... but even though I don't quite understand what kind of battle we're having here, BRING IT ON!!!!

Oh my one suggestion would be to shorten how long you spend doing the dishes, because it happens early on in the video, and I can imagine alot of people just turning off the video at that point cause they might assume it's not going anywhere. It's kind of a long time to be staring at the bed while the dishes sounds are going. Other than that it actually made me lol, the most at the "mouse" part.
 
symphonious7 said:
YOU DID GOOD!!! And you were inspired by me??? I'm sooo flattered!! I'm not sure how I'm supposed to respond to this "challenge"... but even though I don't quite understand what kind of battle we're having here, BRING IT ON!!!!
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Battles over nothing and for no cause or purpose are the best ones :)
 
symphonious7 said:
YOU DID GOOD!!! And you were inspired by me??? I'm sooo flattered!! I'm not sure how I'm supposed to respond to this "challenge"... but even though I don't quite understand what kind of battle we're having here, BRING IT ON!!!!

Oh my one suggestion would be to shorten how long you spend doing the dishes, because it happens early on in the video, and I can imagine alot of people just turning off the video at that point cause they might assume it's not going anywhere. It's kind of a long time to be staring at the bed while the dishes sounds are going. Other than that it actually made me lol, the most at the "mouse" part.
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Haha thanks!

Im planning on releasing my rap orientated comedy every sunday!
 
Dude this was pretty funny! You might be on to something with comedy.

The only thing I can criticize is the first time you leave the room to do dishes, my A.D.D. almost kicked in.. perhaps you could of shortened it, and added something like "3 minutes later" but none the less it was pretty darn good. Keep it up!
 
Th3StuffShow said:
Dude this was pretty funny! You might be on to something with comedy.

The only thing I can criticize is the first time you leave the room to do dishes, my A.D.D. almost kicked in.. perhaps you could of shortened it, and added something like "3 minutes later" but none the less it was pretty darn good. Keep it up!
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That's exactly what I said, I'm afraid it's gonna hurt his chances of people finishing the video cause they'll assume it's going nowhere at that point and click to something else.
 
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