SUNSET WORKS IN PROGRESS VIDEO

You are evidently a good artist (though I am not a big fan of the style of this piece of work) but I can't help feeling that the default iMovie titles/transition effects really detract from the video and make it look unprofessional. It also might be interesting for you to give commentary on some of it, talking about how you did the piece...just a though!
 
You are evidently a good artist (though I am not a big fan of the style of this piece of work) but I can't help feeling that the default iMovie titles/transition effects really detract from the video and make it look unprofessional. It also might be interesting for you to give commentary on some of it, talking about how you did the piece...just a though!

I have to second this. I felt that your transitions were a distraction.

A commentary would be interesting too. It would allow you to add a lot of personality to a video, or share tips with others which may be found useful. Or you could just talk about something random, like sports, haha.

I love how it looked at the end though. I could only dream of being that talented, haha!
 
I agree with a lot of what was said and also I would have liked to have seen the end result at the beginning so I could have been engaged to watch the whole 16mins. If you are not going to talk during the video then you could have sped up the video down to 2-5 mins and put some music to it.
 
thank you everyone for your input i appreciate it and sorry it has taken so long to reply i have only just seen the comments. i will make the adjustments on my next work in progress videos
 
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