Student Script: 'Holow'

[Ilssm]

Hey guys, my name's Colin. I am an amateur writer, and am looking for feedback on a short student script I wrote called 'Holow'. 'Holow' is a Sci-Fi Action about how in the year 2023, a guy named Lee Hemming, a black-market trader who deals in the trading of advanced stolen technology, risks loosing everything he knows when his brother and business partner Terry goes missing.

The script is a bit long, but I'd really like some feedback. Maybe a 1 - 10, and what you liked/didn't like and why?

Thanks so much in advance guys.

 

[GamerKeebzy]

downloaded it will read it when i get a chance and give ya some feedback then