Review Please!

[ELLYinHD]

Alright! Tell me every bad about my channel and videos! Tell me what I need to improve on. But, good things don't hurt either, just so I know what to keep doing right

Ready, Set, GO!

 

[Aaayron]

The banner seems big and I can't really see the whole word EllyinHD. But everything else seems to be in order
By the way, what font did you use for that? It looks cool

 

[Retr0mance]

Alright! Tell me every bad about my channel and videos! Tell me what I need to improve on. But, good things don't hurt either, just so I know what to keep doing right

Ready, Set, GO!

Hey bro - right so instant things I notice - the banner seems a little too large (looks very nice though) - and also your audio is a little quiet - This may be because of either your equipment or your confidence. - however after watching a few vids I can see that when you relax into the game you've got a very nice flow to your coms and have skill to back up your chat.

Overall - keep plugging away and work on raising audio levels - people will subscribe for your personality as many times as those who sub because of the games you play.

 

[ELLYinHD]

The banner seems big and I can't really see the whole word EllyinHD. But everything else seems to be in order
By the way, what font did you use for that? It looks cool

Hmm, I will see what I can do with the banner to fix it The font I used 'Ethnocentric' Text but i made it through cinema 4d. I will work on the audio. Thank you for you feedback [DOUBLEPOST=1368658595,1368658469][/DOUBLEPOST]

Hey bro - right so instant things I notice - the banner seems a little too large (looks very nice though) - and also your audio is a little quiet - This may be because of either your equipment or your confidence. - however after watching a few vids I can see that when you relax into the game you've got a very nice flow to your coms and have skill to back up your chat.

Overall - keep plugging away and work on raising audio levels - people will subscribe for your personality as many times as those who sub because of the games you play.

I believe it may be the confidence because I'm not used to doing commentaries yet I will see what I can do with the audio and the banner. Thanks for the feedback

 

[Retr0mance]

Hmm, I will see what I can do with the banner to fix it The font I used 'Ethnocentric' Text but i made it through cinema 4d. I will work on the audio. Thank you for you feedback [DOUBLEPOST=1368658595,1368658469][/DOUBLEPOST]
I believe it may be the confidence because I'm not used to doing commentaries yet I will see what I can do with the audio and the banner. Thanks for the feedback

Not a problem dude - it's definitly something that comes in time! Good luck!

 

[BridieBunny]

Heyyy no criticisms about the channel at all because it looks pretty darn spiffy in my book ^___^.

However, I watched your Channel Introduction - Black Ops Gameplay and, this is just a suggestion, but I think next time you're gonna do anything like an announcement/introduction about your channel (even though it is a gaming channel) I wouldn't recommend doing it over gameplay. In the future perhaps do it over a montage of stuff you've already played sans the audio, if you get me? So it's not stuff your audience have to concentrate on like actual gameplay and even though they've seen it before they won't be bored/disinterested because its like a compilation. Keeping things like announcements and off channel topic stuff short is key here also.

Just my opinion, feel free to disagree or disregard :3 <3
Other than that, fantastic channel, your speech seems really natural.

 

[ELLYinHD]

Not a problem dude - it's definitly something that comes in time! Good luck!

Thanks man [DOUBLEPOST=1368718311,1368718118][/DOUBLEPOST]

Heyyy no criticisms about the channel at all because it looks pretty darn spiffy in my book ^___^.

However, I watched your Channel Introduction - Black Ops Gameplay and, this is just a suggestion, but I think next time you're gonna do anything like an announcement/introduction about your channel (even though it is a gaming channel) I wouldn't recommend doing it over gameplay. In the future perhaps do it over a montage of stuff you've already played sans the audio, if you get me? So it's not stuff your audience have to concentrate on like actual gameplay and even though they've seen it before they won't be bored/disinterested because its like a compilation. Keeping things like announcements and off channel topic stuff short is key here also.

Just my opinion, feel free to disagree or disregard :3 <3
Other than that, fantastic channel, your speech seems really natural.

Thank you for your feedback, I will work on getting better on topic to talk about and different games to talk over