Review our new song!

I like your song. Is this completely yours? It's quite catchy. However, your base is awfully weak - if at all existent. This type of song should enforce additional beats in my heart. Yours seems like I'm just listening on my cell phone speakers that has no extra bass-boosting power. Also, what is the objective of your songs? Why make them? Do you want people to download them? If so, you should provide a link to a free download - free to start you off. You need subscribers to build your reputation. You should probably offer free royalty free music for people to be able to use in their videos. Just ask for people to give you credit, but other than that, allow them to use, splice, and distribute your songs into their videos. This will get your name out there further and also have people coming back for more creative, free, music.

Keep up the good work. I can definitely see talent here. One other thing... remove that face looking picture. Add a hot girl in there instead. Your views will go up and your channel will be more interesting to see. Since your video is all about music, you need some visuals to enhance the satisfaction of the visit.
 
maSkraP said:
I like your song. Is this completely yours? It's quite catchy. However, your base is awfully weak - if at all existent. This type of song should enforce additional beats in my heart. Yours seems like I'm just listening on my cell phone speakers that has no extra bass-boosting power. Also, what is the objective of your songs? Why make them? Do you want people to download them? If so, you should provide a link to a free download - free to start you off. You need subscribers to build your reputation. You should probably offer free royalty free music for people to be able to use in their videos. Just ask for people to give you credit, but other than that, allow them to use, splice, and distribute your songs into their videos. This will get your name out there further and also have people coming back for more creative, free, music.

Keep up the good work. I can definitely see talent here. One other thing... remove that face looking picture. Add a hot girl in there instead. Your views will go up and your channel will be more interesting to see. Since your video is all about music, you need some visuals to enhance the satisfaction of the visit.
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Thank you for all the feedback :D My friend said the bass was too loud lol. And good idea with let people use it for their videos! :) im gonna put a download link up and put more pics in the video! Thanks really appreciated! :D oh yeah and the melody was mine :D
 
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