GafferGames
YTTalk's Local Sloth
Well, only the first part anyway. I've had a few positive reviews, but as these people said they don't know much about gameplay reviewing, so I would like it if someone who does gameplay reviews or even just knows what makes a good LP would be able to have a look over this video for me. I'd really appreciate if you don't sugarcoat at all, be as harsh as you can, and let me know how I could improve it, and if you think I'm engaging enough etc, thanks! 