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[Moe Othman]

Hey everyone, I create comedy/rant videos that are really funny ( but i also use curse words when ranting, so viewer discretion is advised)


Can you guys give me feedback on my videos, what did you think of it, what did you like, what didnt you like, what i should change, etc.

Thank you very much.

 

[dylanmanincfanatic]

Hey everyone, I create comedy/rant videos that are really funny ( but i also use curse words when ranting, so viewer discretion is advised)


Can you guys give me feedback on my videos, what did you think of it, what did you like, what didnt you like, what i should change, etc.

Thank you very much.

I watched Arab stereotypes...

On one hand I love the manic energy of the short, but it also seems very rushed. I get it. If I had a camera on me and I was talking to the world I think my nerves would take over too. Obviously, you edited it to make it choppy and quick, but I am just wondering if you could slow down from an 11 to like an 8?

I like that you aren't afraid to poke fun at yourself and your culture. And, I really appreciate that you have the courage to say hey if I am making fun of myself, you other people aren't safe either. My favorite line in the vid..."b***h you're three shades of vanilla." Really funny and outrageously true!

I think for more variance in your videos, since your set to Vlogger display... Integrating different colors into your backdrops/clothing in your future videos. I've noted three colors (white, blue, and little maroon/red) and wonder if you can't mix it up a bit to make the display of recent videos more engaging? I think purple would work really well for you too?

Hope this helps, or at least makes sense. Best of luck, keep up the good work and keep challenging ignorant perceptions and stereotypes.