RATE MY TRAILER? :D

[Mister Bear]

I would appreciate it if you guys looked at my trailer and gave me some feedback on it . I spent three hours putting it together so I hope you guys enjoy it! Feel free to give me a suggestion on how I can work on it and improve!
Thank You!

 

[IftiBashir]

9 minute trailer??

Trailers need to be short 30secs to a minute max. They need to grip the audience and make them want to subscribe. When I watched yours, when the speech ended I thought that was it, but then saw how long the trailer was. And to be honest, at that point I switched off.

I would keep it short and sweet. Remember its a trailer, not another full video for your channel.

 

[count_teribil]

Hey Mr Bear! I'll check it out later today, I like your channel, I think we have some similarities in our style