Rate my intro(?)

[Chace Nobody]

Not using this one yet, but I might. I wanted a simple intro that tells as much about me as possible (so that people know what they're getting up front--nerdy, nail art, tomboy, makeup, video game love) and as quickly as possible.

Thanks for any feedback!

 

[Th3StuffShow]

Simple, yet effective. I like it. Shows you got skills, and brain and beauty.

 

[Chace Nobody]

Thank you! o^__^o

 

[Tim Hayes]

Simple, straight to the point and shows that you got some ability! very nice

 

[Chace Nobody]

Simple, straight to the point and shows that you got some ability! very nice

Appreciate it!

 

[PowerfulRedHat]

Looks good to me.
Maybe a bit long? But your writing the words out of order was interesting to watch. Very creative!

 

[Chace Nobody]

Thanks I've chopped it from 16 seconds to 12, then to 11, then down to 9-ish so I don't think I could take anymore out... Maybe I could rearrange to have it shorter........


EDIT: ok oops it's 11 seconds... windows live said 9... LIES ...must shorten it nao

 

[PowerfulRedHat]

Thanks I've chopped it from 16 seconds to 12, then to 11, then down to 9-ish so I don't think I could take anymore out... Maybe I could rearrange to have it shorter........

Don't make it shorter than you feel it should be! Some people like longer, more interesting intros, and some people like two second intros. You can try pleasing everybody if you really want though, haha. Cheers!

 

[Chace Nobody]

Well, I think I can increase the speed of the writing part by half a second... it would still be fluid and then it would be just under 9 seconds. I know I usually skip intros longer than 10 seconds so... xD

 

[Talooka]

Really liked it :O And instead of cutting anything out to make it shorter try speeding up the part where you're writing your name (with TWO HANDS [at the same damn time])