Rate my Intro please :D

[ZoomZike]

Heya, I'm new to this site, if you could watch my intro really quick on my channel and give some feedback on it, I would be very grateful

 

[Unknown_User12]

Way too long and has the potential to get you a strike. It has cutscenes which is a no go.

 

[Br00tal]

19 second intro?
I think 10 seconds are too much. And pretty much what APG says too.

 

[ZoomZike]

A little harsh there guys, but I'll take the advice and shorten it, thanks.

 

[Unknown_User12]

A little harsh there guys, but I'll take the advice and shorten it, thanks.

You asked for feedback, if you can't accept criticism, don't ask. I don't sugar coat things.

 

[ZoomZike]

You asked for feedback, if you can't accept criticism, don't ask. I don't sugar coat things.

I just accepted your criticism and actually did what you told me, I'm just saying that there were a couple nicer ways to come across with what you told me without "sugar coating " it.

 

[Unknown_User12]

I just accepted your criticism and actually did what you told me, I'm just saying that there were a couple nicer ways to come across with what you told me without "sugar coating " it.

All I said was too long. How much nicer do you want it?

 

[ZoomZike]

All I said was too long. How much nicer do you want it?

Lol, never mind, I did manage to shorten it down to 9 seconds though. It's my first time on this site so I'm still figuring things out, thanks for the feedback