Rate my intro/outtro

[vyau]

Just spun off my game videos to another channel, CritRate, I would greatly appreciate your brutally honest feedback. I use a transparent overlay and title zooms in with a clear background so the action goes on uninterrupted.

There's an outtro with some beats I made with my iPhone/iKaosillator at the end, please let me know if that works or if you think it's annoying.

Intro: From the start to 0:16 (title zooms in at 0:09)
Outtro: 3:28 to end

Thank you in advance for any input/feedback/criticism/hate.

 

[Surrealness]

I like the intro, it's not too obtrusive and it introduces you effectively However, the outro is way too crowded. There's no order to it. The subscribe button is in an awkward position and it seems out of place with the text font.

The video was really good though! Subscribed

 

[vyau]

I like the intro, it's not too obtrusive and it introduces you effectively However, the outro is way too crowded. There's no order to it. The subscribe button is in an awkward position and it seems out of place with the text font.

The video was really good though! Subscribed

Thanks for checking it out (and subbing)! Yeah I was debating adding an episode title underneath "CritRate" but that might keep me from changing the actual title on YouTube if I find it's not effective (search wise).

And thanks for the criticism about the outtro, I was thinking about centering the preview and putting the sub button underneath, but I also wanted the preview video big enough to see what was happening along with something to describe the previous.

If you have any opinions on the music I'd like to hear that as well, either I keep it for future videos or mix something new, but I sort've like that 8-bit vibe.