Rate My INTRO! :D

[GmanCrafter]

Okay so I have had this intro for about a month now, but I don't know whether it looks good considering its fairly simplistic. Or should I maybe go back and redo it and spend more time on it? Please be honest!

 

[FleaIsStupid]

I think it miiiight be a little bit too long, but the concept is really good for an intro, and it doesn't look too simplistic; not at all. Keep in mind the first 20 seconds of a video are the most important- if the 20 seconds are just an intro, and you aren't showing off your personality to possible subscribers/even current subs, retention goes down. Maybe when your minecrafter is floating off screen, speed it up a bit so it's a bit shorter? or have the twitter/twitch links fade in when the GMAN shows up so you don't have to worry about cutting them off? :3

 

[ilovebanannas]

Okay so I have had this intro for about a month now, but I don't know whether it looks good considering its fairly simplistic. Or should I maybe go back and redo it and spend more time on it? Please be honest!

Great intro! Nice music, not too long, and gets the point across.

 

[GmanCrafter]

I think it miiiight be a little bit too long, but the concept is really good for an intro, and it doesn't look too simplistic; not at all. Keep in mind the first 20 seconds of a video are the most important- if the 20 seconds are just an intro, and you aren't showing off your personality to possible subscribers/even current subs, retention goes down. Maybe when your minecrafter is floating off screen, speed it up a bit so it's a bit shorter? or have the twitter/twitch links fade in when the GMAN shows up so you don't have to worry about cutting them off? :3

Thanks for the feedback, I have been think about making the text 3D too so that an actual object is hitting him, if you get my drift [DOUBLEPOST=1367160067,1367160032][/DOUBLEPOST]

Great intro! Nice music, not too long, and gets the point across.

Thanks man, appreciate it

 

[ilovebanannas]

Thanks for the feedback, I have been think about making the text 3D too so that an actual object is hitting him, if you get my drift [DOUBLEPOST=1367160067,1367160032][/DOUBLEPOST]

Thanks man, appreciate it

Yeah, that would be amazing! 3D text looks really good compared to 2D. You should definitely add 3d text! SUBBED!

 

[GmanCrafter]

I think it miiiight be a little bit too long, but the concept is really good for an intro, and it doesn't look too simplistic; not at all. Keep in mind the first 20 seconds of a video are the most important- if the 20 seconds are just an intro, and you aren't showing off your personality to possible subscribers/even current subs, retention goes down. Maybe when your minecrafter is floating off screen, speed it up a bit so it's a bit shorter? or have the twitter/twitch links fade in when the GMAN shows up so you don't have to worry about cutting them off? :3

And I have been thinking about cutting a good part of the video (about 5 secs long) and putting it before the intro too

 

[ilovebanannas]

Thanks for the feedback, I have been think about making the text 3D too so that an actual object is hitting him, if you get my drift [DOUBLEPOST=1367160067,1367160032][/DOUBLEPOST]

Thanks man, appreciate it

The reason I subbed: GMod and Minecraft are my two favorite games!

 

[FleaIsStupid]

And I have been thinking about cutting a good part of the video (about 5 secs long) and putting it before the intro too

That's a good idea- putting a funny bit or something of the sort before your intro is something I've seen before, and it always grabs my interest right away.

 

[GmanCrafter]

The reason I subbed: GMod and Minecraft are my two favorite games!

Thanks man, two of my favorite games too! But are you sure you subbed, hasn't showed in my email or channel page!

 

[jamsterkid]

thats a really good intro. but if possible i would just speed it up a little bit?