Please check my 3D optical Space intro | Unlisted video | SUGGESTIONS!!!

[Priyam]

HeY GUYS,

So just check my video and please suggest some improvements. If its the music please tell because i feel my music is little weird. It TOOK ME 6-7 HRS to make this so please, i want to make this intro PERFECT! Please suggest!
NOTE: WATCH IN HD ONLY!

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[Flammy]

Honestly, the way the text is 3D reminds me of overused powerpoint text effects. I would consider changing it...

Color, lens flair, audio is fine.

 

[Priyam]

Honestly, the way the text is 3D reminds me of overused powerpoint text effects. I would consider changing it...
Color, lens flair, audio is fine.

Thank for responding !

Seriously? Is the font bad, the metal brush, point or source lightings , front or side colour, shade or the entire thing? Believe it or not but that took me 3hrs to make! Everything else took me 3hrs to make. So on hearing to remove the thing which you worked on the MOST hurts . But i guess it might be the same for everyone. So what is bad as i stated above? please specify and again thanks for responding

 

[Flammy]

Thank for responding !

Seriously? Is the font bad, the metal brush, point or source lightings , front or side colour, shade or the entire thing? Believe it or not but that took me 3hrs to make! Everything else took me 3hrs to make. So on hearing to remove the thing which you worked on the MOST hurts . But i guess it might be the same for everyone. So what is bad as i stated above? please specify and again thanks for responding

The shading and especially the depth. Color works really well with the background.

Another thing is you might want to consider leaving off the numbers, unless they are important to your youtube image. I'm "flammy5" but I always write my name and introduce myself as "Flammy". unneeded numbers are unneeded.

If you think this will hurt when people try to find your channel... maybe. probably super minor. Plus there are people like www.youtube.com/user/Niichts who go by the name 'Star' so I don't think he really has any issues

 

[Priyam]

The shading and especially the depth. Color works really well with the background.

Another thing is you might want to consider leaving off the numbers, unless they are important to your youtube image. I'm "flammy5" but I always write my name and introduce myself as "Flammy". unneeded numbers are unneeded.

If you think this will hurt when people try to find your channel... maybe. probably super minor. Plus there are people like www.youtube.com/user/Niichts who go by the name 'Star' so I don't think he really has any issues

Well actually i applied no shading, only a metal brush effect to the side part of the text that is bulging out to make it look 3D. Well actually i do need the numbers, i was a complete idiot 1 years back not thinking about the name and keeping such a dirty name. Well thanks for your advice and feedbacks, ill try to work on it, also is the FONT alright? or should i change it?

 

[Flammy]

Well actually i applied no shading, only a metal brush effect to the side part of the text that is bulging out to make it look 3D. Well actually i do need the numbers, i was a complete idiot 1 years back not thinking about the name and keeping such a dirty name. Well thanks for your advice and feedbacks, ill try to work on it, also is the FONT alright? or should i change it?

The font is pretty simple... it doesn't really stand out, but it at the same time it is pretty readable.

Something like in your yttalk avatar is more styalized and unique... really depends what you want and what your goal is I guess.

 

[Priyam]

The font is pretty simple... it doesn't really stand out, but it at the same time it is pretty readable.

Something like in your yttalk avatar is more styalized and unique... really depends what you want and what your goal is I guess.

My Yttalk avatar? Oh my god i actually drew that except for the few effects ive added above and down as you can see. So what is a good font according to your knowledge? Just one font name you can tell just to give me an idea, because i didn't really understand your word "simple" for fonts. I'm into FX and all other kind of specail effects and video edittings but i don't really have too much good idea about fonts. So just an example and i can get started redesigning my text?

 

[Flammy]

My Yttalk avatar? Oh my god i actually drew that except for the few effects ive added above and down as you can see. So what is a good font according to your knowledge? Just one font name you can tell just to give me an idea, because i didn't really understand your word "simple" for fonts. I'm into FX and all other kind of specail effects and video edittings but i don't really have too much good idea about fonts. So just an example and i can get started redesigning my text?

I'm not a font or graphic design expert, just sharing my first impressions and personally what I like and dislike... so take everything with a grain of salt.

Font wise, I use Lithos Pro for most of my channel branding stuff. You can see it in action on my channel (linked in signature) and can read about my channel design on my own thread here in the rate my branding forum.