Rip the Script
Mr. Sarcasm
SO I recently helped a filmmaker friend of mine on a short-film he directed, and I'm pretty happy with how it came out. Hope you all enjoy it.
Our newest horror film
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Thrashbat
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Wow @Rip the Script that was really, really, really good! I am seriously impressed.
Things I liked:
Things I think could be improved:
Good job! You should be proud being a part of that!
Things I liked:
- The explosion intro is genius. That always gets attention.
- The concept was cool, the execution really well done. The shadow always looked like a shadow.
- It told a cool story with great lighting, effects, music, and video quality.
Things I think could be improved:
- A few slow points. Probably a little too much 'dead air.' Him walking, him playing shadows with an honest shadow.
- The actual video ends at like 4:12. The credits are so long that it goes over another minute, which I think always looks bad. Fewer people will click on a video that is 5 minutes than 4.
- The sudden introduction of screaming when the shadow reaches out was something I didn't like. Earlier, when the shadow jumped up and scared him, the music played a loud note. The screams later were inconsistent, unexpected, and jarring. The visuals themselves were fine at that point.
Good job! You should be proud being a part of that!