Love the voice. It has an oldies resonance, circa Motown era. Guitar rhythm was also on point. Love the finger picking to break up the strumming pattern too.
I'd re-shoot it and back the shot up a little bit so you're not getting cut-off on the top. People dig symmetry it can be weird to have the top part of your head disappearing.
The song was very well crafted and I love the Uh-uh-ohs, I keep getting an, Angel Baby vibe from Rosie and The Originals from your voice. I hope you keep making more music, you've definitely got talent and are very easy on the eyes =)