Thanks I made another one of these my singing teacher said I did great at thisThis is goood, but to make it better i think try and make.it no soft or airy.. Like emphasize on the words dont just sing it but feel it. It sounds a bit like too much head voice if you sang it like beginning the eh eh yeah that qould be good. You have such a nice smile haha but keep going also if you could check out mu channel ot would mean a lot