Oldest Talking Video vs. Newest

Vincent the Watermelon

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Hey guys,
I was wondering if I could get feedback regarding my oldest talking video versus my newest video. Please tell me if I'm headed in a good direction or if I should change something.

Oldest Talking Video:

Newest Video:

Thanks for your time and the feedback!:)
 
I think you may need to find some way to compress your voice or use another mic as there's lots of clipping and distortion in both videos. I like the newest talking video as your dynamics have a lot of variety and better timing when it comes to dead air compared to the first video. I'm glad you're asking for tips as to what you can do to improve. I think you're going in the right direction as long as you try to be as original and energetic as possible.
 
I think you may need to find some way to compress your voice or use another mic as there's lots of clipping and distortion in both videos. I like the newest talking video as your dynamics have a lot of variety and better timing when it comes to dead air compared to the first video. I'm glad you're asking for tips as to what you can do to improve. I think you're going in the right direction as long as you try to be as original and energetic as possible.

Thanks :) Actually, I am looking in to getting a new mic so that should be solved at some point. Thanks for the feedback!
 
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