New Youtube Video Channel Design Need All Your Feedback

Am Divya Jayadevan from India i was away from youtube and now came back to get more active on youtube and will post regularly please check it and give me some serious suggestions and feedback so that we can improve and will help thousands of people to find better video content online.
 
Am Divya Jayadevan from India i was away from youtube and now came back to get more active on youtube and will post regularly please check it and give me some serious suggestions and feedback so that we can improve and will help thousands of people to find better video content online.
Welcome to the forums! Enjoy your stay here Divya Jayadevan, 'ol buddy 'ol pal.
 
Hello Divya, I like the channel layout, and I myself am quite partial to more simplified backgrounds/logos. I love the colors used and only really have 2 things I thought I'd mention.

1. The black boxes, what are they for? I'd much rather see the side logos and their backgrounds either continue and replace the black boxes, or have some sort of picture/design there. It seems like it creates a "hole" or a break in the background and sticks out a lot. *Just my opinion!*

2. The grammar of the description. Don't ask me how important this is, I have no idea who actually reads these. It just bothers me to see no periods, some commas, and misuse of words here and there. If you're not a native english speaker I certainly hope you don't take this personally. Here's the version I would use, I hope you find some use for it:

Hello! My name is Divya. Myself and Jayadevan share some of the best video moments from the world around us. We use the name TRUE MIRROR on YouTube. We share videos in categories like new technologies, music videos, nature, tutorials, travel, angling and fishing trip videos, and hangouts. Lets have fun and please don't forget to SUBSCRIBE to us, and share videos with friends!
 
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