New video in need of review

Fluxzy

Fluxzy

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My most recent lets play. I want the reviews to be as critical as possible. If you dont think i can do anything better then thankyou, but anything in the slightest that bugs you, tell me!

 
It was pretty good. I guess the main thing for me is your commentary is not in sync with the game. What I mean is your mood is off. A lot of interesting, scary stuff is going on, but you seem sarcastic, laid back, and uninterested almost. It's not too interesting when considering the commentary supplementing the game. Try to keep it more relevant in terms of your tone, and do more to sound involved and invested in the game. That's my take anyways.
 
First off thanks for the review. And I agree with sounding uninvolved, I was annoyed about some rules about monetization on youtube and ended up talking too much about achievements in the game and stuff. I have already filmed the next part, but I felt like I focussed a lot more. Thanks for the feedback!
 
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