New vid could use feedback.

[Rhinocat]

Just did this one last night, still trying to figure how I can catch people's attention and make them care what I have to say. So we will see what happens. Any and all feedback welcome.

 

[Jason Ingersoll]

I like it good job!

 

[Tarmack]

I like the knowledge level that you show about the expansion.

If I had to make suggestions it would be primarily two things. "What's up guys" is probably the most common youtube greeting. If you find something else it will help the beginning of your video. I would also concentrate heavily on working the "umm's" out. It's difficult and took me quite a while to get rid of and even still they slip in now and then.

 

[Rhinocat]

Thanks man defiantly some good advice I am going to work off of.