New To Vlogs :) Feedback?

[FromRobbie]

Looking for some helpful feedback on my vlogs
Only have two up atm.

First one:

Latest (second) one:

Thanks

P.S. They are edited so I hope they are better that way

 

[Kath]

Hello, I like the videos...I liked the music you used in the background, I love your accent. Keep up the good work

 

[FromRobbie]

Thanks Katherine

 

[Stef]

Nice video for it to be your second one. If I could make a suggestion I would say lower the music a bit so that it's playing softly in the background because as it is now it sort of distracts from what it is you're saying. It's a really good start though.

 

[FromRobbie]

Thanks for the advice stefan! I will take this into account next time