Need a Video Reviewed[ Will give 1YTDollar per review]

[DreStationGaming]

**Please keep in mind I only have $11 Right now in YT Money so if you see 11 others post PM before reviewing I want to make your I can give you the $ **

My 4th and latest video is a commentary from E3 witch was an Expo on video games. This is a recording from the Event of a game that has yet to come out* That's why its not recorded threw my HD PVR. My commentary is a bit rough any tips on that would be awesome! I want to improve that as much as possible so anything you can do to help that would be amazing!

ANY and ALL Feed back is welcomed

 

[Wilad]

Hey man,

Thought you had good energy and seem likeable. I'm not sure who RG 3 is though, is that you're player? Maybe try telling a joke or something in the middle of it to mix it up. I would also do what you can to record the video feed directly. That's what I thought man. And you can even keep the dollar

 

[DreStationGaming]

Hey man,

Thought you had good energy and seem likeable. I'm not sure who RG 3 is though, is that you're player? Maybe try telling a joke or something in the middle of it to mix it up. I would also do what you can to record the video feed directly. That's what I thought man. And you can even keep the dollar

Your awesome! lol Thank you. Couldn't record the feed Directly because this was only being shown at a live event lol RG3 is Robert Griffin III. An American Football Rookie coming from college. So the game being recorded hasn't come out yet and no1 has been able to use this player in there home consoles lol Thank you for saying I'm likable!! I'll work on adding a joke next Commentary TY!

 

[Wilad]

Your awesome! lol Thank you. Couldn't record the feed Directly because this was only being shown at a live event lol RG3 is Robert Griffin III. An American Football Rookie coming from college. So the game being recorded hasn't come out yet and no1 has been able to use this player in there home consoles lol Thank you for saying I'm likable!! I'll work on adding a joke next Commentary TY!

May I suggest going "Hey did you hear Willie Nelson just got hit by a car!....yeah he was playing on the road again".

 

[DreStationGaming]

lol I don't get it lol =/

 

[Wilad]

lol I don't get it lol =/

Haha yeah it's a little outdated I guess. 'On the road again' was one of his songs, so it's like a play on words of performing the song and actually playing in the street where you may get hit by a car. This much explanation is never a good sign for a comedian

 

[Tarmack]

I would agree with you being a likeable personality. You generally keep the comments flowing with little downtime. The video quality is rough but you know that given the source you had to record from.

I have a few suggestions. A new microphone may be something that helps your vids greatly. It will allow you to cut out the background hum a bit if you picked up a condenser mic. A lot of people like the Blue Yeti USB mic. I prefer XLR mics so I've not tried it but it has good reviews and is usually not much more than $100. I would also suggest some editing. Download Audacity (Free audio program) and get rid of those sniffles.

And beyond that, I'd love to see someone do sports game commentary like you'd see on TV during an actual game. That kind of high energy could be quite interesting to watch.

 

[DreStationGaming]

I would agree with you being a likeable personality. You generally keep the comments flowing with little downtime. The video quality is rough but you know that given the source you had to record from.

I have a few suggestions. A new microphone may be something that helps your vids greatly. It will allow you to cut out the background hum a bit if you picked up a condenser mic. A lot of people like the Blue Yeti USB mic. I prefer XLR mics so I've not tried it but it has good reviews and is usually not much more than $100. I would also suggest some editing. Download Audacity (Free audio program) and get rid of those sniffles.

And beyond that, I'd love to see someone do sports game commentary like you'd see on TV during an actual game. That kind of high energy could be quite interesting to watch.

TY! I'm going to write that down I do use Audacity but don't know how to edit on it lol n lmao da sniffles are bad lol I want a mic it just a matter of time b4 i get 1 thanks for calling me likable means a lot!!