My worst animation

[RF15]

So I decided to post (what I feel is) my worst animation, because I think that getting feedback (especially negative) on my worst video will help to make my best video in the future

Give all the negative feedback you want! (but please be polite about it)

 

[Thrashbat]

Well, the plot wasn't wildly clear (nightmare in b/w, right?). The stop motion was pretty good. If I could choose one thing to improve about it, @RF15, I'd say try to make objects not move when they're not supposed to move. For example, when he gets in the bed, it moves some. But, if this is your worst video, you're very good! And as a fellow animator, though not stop motion, I understand!

 

[RF15]

Well, the plot wasn't wildly clear (nightmare in b/w, right?). The stop motion was pretty good. If I could choose one thing to improve about it, @RF15, I'd say try to make objects not move when they're not supposed to move. For example, when he gets in the bed, it moves some. But, if this is your worst video, you're very good! And as a fellow animator, though not stop motion, I understand!

Yeah, I need to work on all the stuff you said. Strangely enough, I have very shaky hands for someone who does this. Thanks for the advice!

 

[Thrashbat]

Yeah, I need to work on all the stuff you said. Strangely enough, I have very shaky hands for someone who does this. Thanks for the advice!

Lol, you have shaky hands? Perhaps this and disarming bombs are not professions to look into

Just kidding, you're pretty good at this (don't know about disarming bombs, though ).