My videos... crit please :D

I think both of them are very good, you ask plenty of questions in them for people to answer as well which is always good for provoking responses and you will find out what people want to see etc that way. I think you could have ended the second one with a thanks for watching as well that would have ended it great.

One of the only things I think could be improved is your watermark in the bottom right corner, it would be better if it had your channel name on it or if you could make your current icon here at YTtalk say JoltzProject rather than Jolt on its own and use that on the videos. That way people watching will remember the name, they could potentially search you as Jolt on YouTube and find a different channel or a closed one and think you have left YouTube. Your audio and video quality is very good and your voice is clear.

Good work!
 
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