My Minecraft episodes need reviewing

[UKEStv]

Hey guys I'm on episode two of my minecraft series and would like it reviewed by people who like minecraft commentarys so I know what I could do with it to get it more popular. If you could post comments on it on giving me idea's and stuff that would be highly appriciated

www.youtube.com/user/ukestv

 

[ianharding]

Will take a look now!!!

 

[ianharding]

ive had a look as it took ages to load!! thought about a castle with those dog wolves thingy's??

 

[UKEStv]

Hmmm don't know why it took ages to load it should of loaded straight away

 

[ianharding]

probably my connection!!