My First "In-The-Flesh" Video: How'd I do?

[TundraZer0]

Non-gamers, don't be intimidated by the seemingly pure-gaming video. It's really not. It's honestly more of a comedy vlog.

This is my first video where it's actually me acting in front of a camera, and not solely behind a microphone behind the scenes. This is completely out of my element, and I would love advice to help improve my camera angles, acting, or whatever. Also, should I have had background music in here, do you think? I wasn't quite sure if that'd be too distracting or whatever.

Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated. :joyful2:

 

[Turwinkle]

The content was great! Though you were muffled quite a bit behind the mask. You did a great job with the information and props! Your cuts were good! The outtakes at the end were great!

 

[TundraZer0]

The content was great! Though you were muffled quite a bit behind the mask. You did a great job with the information and props! Your cuts were good! The outtakes at the end were great!

Thanks! And yeah, I was kinda wondering how audible I would be or not with that mask, especially when I'm talking in that raspy (and honestly kinda painful) voice. I might just have to try to talk a bit louder or something, I dunno. I'll do my best to improve.