Ok, here's a couple of suggestions. The first one is to be more aware of when you're repeating yourself, maybe you could watch the video back and just edit out any spots where you are, and also, the picture at the end, does not need to be left up there NEAR that long. You should have that up there for like... oh 12 seconds at the MOST. Probably really more like 8 or 9 would be ideal. But I subscribed to you, because you seem to have a passion for music, and I think you've got heart. Thanks for sharing. I do music and comedy and all kinds of things on my channel, and if you have heard of Kony 2012 and know what it's all about, then I'd appreciate you checking out my song "Pleasure and Pain" or my song "Soul Tie" But if you HAVEN'T seen the Kony 2012 video, then please watch it first, even if it's the only video you watch. It's far more important, trust me. Thanks!Hey! I just recently posted a review for a music video on my channel, like I said before I was planning on veering into more entertainment reviews. If you guys could comment I would REALLY appreciate it and I could let you know what I think about you stuff too if you want me to.
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I think I'll get more comfortable with expressing my opinions as I continue making videos, and I'll try to edit out when I repeat myself.