Parallax Abstraction
I've Got It
Hey everyone. So I recently did a longer episode of my Retro Flashback show which I've been running for a couple of months and I thought this might be a good candidate to finally solicit feedback from the community. I have no formal training in voiceover or commentary but I've been trying to improve my delivery as the show has evolved, in addition to buying better audio equipment and getting it tuned so I sound a bit more professional. I think I've finally hit that point and it's time to ask for some comments.
A couple of things to note:
-This video is about twice the length of my average one and that's because I'm talking about the package's wrapper in addition to the games in the package. There's an annotation in the video to skip to the game play so if 44 minutes is too long for you, feel free to use it.
-My biggest self-critical gripe is my use of umms and uhhs. I personally can't stand this in videos and am trying to minimise my use of them but I know it's not perfect yet. I've also been told by others that most people don't care as much about that and it's just my own bug bear. I'm curious what people here think about that.
-Feel free to offer any feedback on the intro and outro as well. I'd really like to find a better tune for the outro (something preferably chip tune) but haven't found anything yet. If anyone has ideas where I could look, I'd love to hear them.
I welcome any and all feedback, including constructive criticism. I'm a firm believer in that hearing everything people think is the only way I can truly improve and I really want to make a proper go of this so feel free to tell me anything you think. I do have other episodes as well so feel free to check them for comparison if you wish but this one is I think the top of my game thus far. Thanks everyone, I hope you enjoy it.
A couple of things to note:
-This video is about twice the length of my average one and that's because I'm talking about the package's wrapper in addition to the games in the package. There's an annotation in the video to skip to the game play so if 44 minutes is too long for you, feel free to use it.
-My biggest self-critical gripe is my use of umms and uhhs. I personally can't stand this in videos and am trying to minimise my use of them but I know it's not perfect yet. I've also been told by others that most people don't care as much about that and it's just my own bug bear. I'm curious what people here think about that.
-Feel free to offer any feedback on the intro and outro as well. I'd really like to find a better tune for the outro (something preferably chip tune) but haven't found anything yet. If anyone has ideas where I could look, I'd love to hear them.
I welcome any and all feedback, including constructive criticism. I'm a firm believer in that hearing everything people think is the only way I can truly improve and I really want to make a proper go of this so feel free to tell me anything you think. I do have other episodes as well so feel free to check them for comparison if you wish but this one is I think the top of my game thus far. Thanks everyone, I hope you enjoy it.