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[JustGamersTBF]

Hey Guys,
Its me IBen x TbF x again, i'm looking for a bit of help from you. To help me out all i need you to do it watch my video and give me some constructive criticism so i can take effect and update my commentating and game play style. It will only take a few minutes so please if you have the time it would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you for your time

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[Michael]

I watched your latest video there and these are the things I think could do with some improving:

1. I think the video quality could be better, at present the quality is fine for playing in the player on your channel but anyone who watches this on a larger monitor wont enjoy the quality, investing in a PVR like the Hauppage one here

http://www.google.co.uk/products/ca...a=X&ei=TrY2T47eEeKk0QWOg9TAAg&ved=0CFYQ8wIwAA

would really make the quality better.

2. I think that the video is quiet in a lot of places, the best gaming commentaries I have watched rarely go silent for more than a second or two, one of our forum members here TheDutch1k is a great example of being able to keep the talking going.

Commentating throughout will tend to lower the amount of people getting bored watching the video and going elsewhere, you want to keep them on your video and not someone elses.

3. I would either fix up your intro by adding some audio and maybe some text to it or redo the intro again and add in some branding, I think it should be branded with your channel name at least.

Your channel:

I think you should make the switch to the new layout, its more visually pleasing and you can still have your video on autoplay when using it, it is better to get used to it now rather than have YouTube force the change on you in March, I believe that's on the 7th. It would be nice to see a background too and some colour changes suiting the background you go for so that it isnt left as default.

Hope this helps