Sup

and im using photoshop!
Okay great

So:
1st - I am going to start with the background of the banner
- It is really boring and ugly, it doesnt really go with the rest of the banner (those pokemons and stuff)
-The colors, you should add more colors to it girl! Colors are beautifull and warm, and nice to watch

So yeah use colors, not grey and dark blue and dark green X)
-It doesnt look clean, maybe because of all the clouds, try to make a simple background like a gradient of 2 colors, if you dont know how to do a gradient google it, you will probably find a tuturial hihi
- So yeah, more colors, clean it up a bit, and make nice to look at

2nd - Those renders
- So, those pokemon renders you used are not good, or at least dont look good, always try to find high quality renders

- Dont use the full render, like, they are really small, and that doesnt look good, you should always focus on the top of the render, and try to make the renders look bigger, dont put them so small

3rd - The text
- Oh the text, the font you chose is really bad, its hard to read, it should never be hard to read, it is just terrible, change the Font! There are so many good fonts at dafont X)
- The colors, the colors you choose, are not the best, you should only stick with one color, or a set of similar colors (red/orange)(blue/purple)
4rth - That neon line
- I really like what you where going to do with it, and props for you for being able to play with layers XD I couldnt do that at the beggining X) But that line just looks ugly, like it should have more color coming out of it, maybe go to: Layer > Layer Style > Outer glow, and add a color to your glow X) It will look better
5th - The blending
- Dont know if you know what i mean with this word, but its how it all goes together, it looks bad, different colors and that stuff. So use gradient maps (once again google it), gradient maps are a great way of adding color to a banner,
So, watch some tuturials, you will get the hang of it really fast

But good work for a 1st try, mine was a lot worse X)