Intro / trailer done. Could use your thoughts before uploading

[Gediphoto]

I think I just finished my intro/trailer video which is about 1 minute long (+20 seconds for end screen) I think I got it all:

- Script
- Lights
- Sound
- Sound design
- Color grading
- 4K / 24fps
- Intro
- Intro logo video
- Story/Message
- Transitions
- Ending
- End screen

For those that want to see and give some thoughts as if I've missed something, check the raw video here: https://www.gediphoto.com/intro.mp4 I'll probably upload it within a few days as is, or if I get some feedback I might fix that of course

Thanks!!
/G