I'm New Here - My First Shared Video

Your icon needs to be in a corner or at a border not in the frame itself... The elephant in the room is pretty big, perhaps a bit too big for the logo... What´s up with it anyways? Why do you have it? The story behind it could be interesting to talk about ;)
Your intro was way too fast! I had to rewind and pause to see it fully...
44 seconds is pretty short for a Vlog of any kind... aim for at least 2-3 minutes minimum... Take the camera with you if you can and film various things you do, vlog in a car hehe
Or you could make mental notes over the day and tell us about it after you are comfortably at home sitting down...:)
show me around the house! That fireplace... I want it lol :D

Jonathan
 
JD´s World said:
Your icon needs to be in a corner or at a border not in the frame itself... The elephant in the room is pretty big, perhaps a bit too big for the logo... What´s up with it anyways? Why do you have it? The story behind it could be interesting to talk about ;)
Your intro was way too fast! I had to rewind and pause to see it fully...
44 seconds is pretty short for a Vlog of any kind... aim for at least 2-3 minutes minimum... Take the camera with you if you can and film various things you do, vlog in a car hehe
Or you could make mental notes over the day and tell us about it after you are comfortably at home sitting down...:)
show me around the house! That fireplace... I want it lol :D

Jonathan
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The elephant is the mascot for the Alabama college football team. I'm a big college football fan. As far as where I put it in my video, that's one of my editing problems. When I try to move it to an extreme corner of the video, it gets cut out...it disappears. I don't know how to fix that.

As for the intro, there is a longer version of it but it still moves fast. I didn't make the intro but I thought it was cool.
 
Holy COW you have alot of videos. I'm guessing that means you have a large fanbase as well? If so, I can imagine them liking this vlog its a little informative about what's going on with you. For me? I don't know who you are, I sleep all day too sometimes but I mean, I'm not really interested in hearing about someone else doing it that I don't know. If I had already subbed to you because I'd heard a great opinion or review or something I liked and I felt like I "knew" you, then I'd be like "oh man I have those days too!" But right now while I'm trying to figure out what you're all about, this doesn't tell me anything. I KNOW you have like 200 other videos that probably say alot more, this is just the first one I've seen so I'm just telling you how it struck me having not known you.
 
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