I just need to know if there is anything I can improve in my video for better content
- Thread starter UnknownKingOfCut
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I don't sugar coat my reviews. So I don't hold anything back. Just so you know.
First things first- You should enable monetization so you can get custom thumbnails. Then make a good thumbnail for the video! Also I would change the title. A good theme is looks something like this: "Minecraft Suvival - [Insert interesting episode title here] (Ep. 1)". The title you have now isn't interesting, and it isn't going to get anyone to click on it.
I would get a different recorder. The "www.bandicam.com" on the top is a bit distracting and makes your videos look less profesional. It's not something major, but it will help your video more.
You need to speak up. I have to turn up my volume to hear you. Also turn down the game volume. You want your voice to be louder than the game in the background. I would edit out times when there is a long pause of no talking. The first minute and a half was a bit boring because you weren't saying much. You sound a bit bored, and your voice is very monotone. Makes it a bit boring to watch. You defiantly need to talk about something. Even if it doesn't relate to Minecraft. Have fun with it. Loosen up! Don't be afraid to go crazy, make weird voices, talk about life! Anything to keep the conversation going. Of course it takes practice, but the sooner you start to loosen up, the better your commentary will become.
I think your gameplay is good, just need to work on your commentary. The long pauses with no talking, and then when you do talk it isn't very much just makes the video a bit boring to watch. Keep practicing
First things first- You should enable monetization so you can get custom thumbnails. Then make a good thumbnail for the video! Also I would change the title. A good theme is looks something like this: "Minecraft Suvival - [Insert interesting episode title here] (Ep. 1)". The title you have now isn't interesting, and it isn't going to get anyone to click on it.
I would get a different recorder. The "www.bandicam.com" on the top is a bit distracting and makes your videos look less profesional. It's not something major, but it will help your video more.
You need to speak up. I have to turn up my volume to hear you. Also turn down the game volume. You want your voice to be louder than the game in the background. I would edit out times when there is a long pause of no talking. The first minute and a half was a bit boring because you weren't saying much. You sound a bit bored, and your voice is very monotone. Makes it a bit boring to watch. You defiantly need to talk about something. Even if it doesn't relate to Minecraft. Have fun with it. Loosen up! Don't be afraid to go crazy, make weird voices, talk about life! Anything to keep the conversation going. Of course it takes practice, but the sooner you start to loosen up, the better your commentary will become.
I think your gameplay is good, just need to work on your commentary. The long pauses with no talking, and then when you do talk it isn't very much just makes the video a bit boring to watch. Keep practicing